The creepy Room
When i was in bed something creepy happened all my things were moving so i got off my bed but when i turned back my bed was gone so i to tell my dad Jake but he just said go close the door so Sam went back in her room then when she closed the door everything disappeared. Sam said there is something strange happening in this room.Then Sam heard a noise she thought it was her mum kate but it wasn’t then she she heard it again and said it was her big sister cat but she was at her friend's house.
The next day Sam and cat went to the park but then Sam turned around to go back because she thought there will be ghost and invisible monsters then when Cat got to the park she looked behind her and said should we go and play on the seesaw but Sam wasn’t there.
Then Cat yelled Sam where are you going Sam said i am going home because i am scared i think i saw some ghost and invisible monster then Cat said there is no such thing as ghost and invisible monsters.
At the night time Sam and herb sister cat sleeps in same room so cat went by Sam and said there is no ghost in your room or there is no invisible monsters.
Ki Ora Shanti my name is Oliver. I am a student at Grey Main School in Mamaku hub Greymouth. I really really like your work that you did for this week. The thing that I like the most is how you put heaps and heaps of information about the creepy room but maybe next time you should add more information about so we now what you are doing.
ReplyDeleteWhy did you not add information at the top?
Why did you add heaps and heaps of information?
Kia Ora Shanti my name is Kaine. I really like how you worked you for this week. The thing that I like the most is how you put heaps of information in about the creepy room but maybe next time you should add more information about so we now what you are doing.
ReplyDeleteWhy did you add heaps and heaps of information? Noho iho rā.