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Tuesday 30 August 2016




The Crocodile Eater. A long time ago in 2018 there lived a Crocodile eater that loved to eat and eat but when he went back under the water and all of the fis were gone. Then the Crocodile was hugging the tree and he was crying for food because all of the Kaimoana was gone he thought the crying will bring the Kia back. Then the problem got worse becauses the Crocodile was getting angry and angry and he punched all of the trees down. The problem got fixed because there was this man that offended the Crocodile 20 fish. The lesson that the Crocodile learnt was to go back under the water when the fish go under the water.

2 comments:

  1. Rashantie you have made a great start but where is the rest?

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  2. hi Rashantie,i like your writing but mabey next time you should chek it makes sence
    when you have some free time please check out my blog http://edhillocean-breezep.blogspot.co.nz/

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